Let’s do sports！

毛俊莹

Do you like playing sports？ I like it very much. My favorite sport is playing badminton. Because I think its very interesting and cool. I often play it with my parents in the square. In my opinion， doing sports means a lot in our daily life.

Firstly，it can help us to keep in good shape.

Secondly，it can keep us in good health. It was reported that the persons who play sports every day get less chance of getting diseases than those who never or less do it. As the old saying ， life depends on moving.

Finally，if I do sports well， I can get more marks in the P.E. exam. I think everyone should play sports. On the one hand， it can keep us healthy. On the other hand， we can learn more from it. Boys and girls， Lets do sports from now on.

简评：现在全球的肥胖问题越来越严重，肥胖人数的比例也逐年增加，运动保健成为一个热门话题。本文是一篇考场作文，从作文题目可以看出这是一篇呼吁大家做运动的文章。小作者能够从文章结构入手，首尾呼应，点明主旨。特别值得一提的是，文章结构清晰。这也是我一直提倡的写作方法——总分总结构，先提出论点，分层论证，最后总结，一目了然。本文开门见山，提出“Do you like playing sports？ I like it very much”，然后举出自己最喜欢的运动是羽毛球，再引出下文做运动好处多多。分三点进行论证，顺序清晰 firstly ， secondly ， finally。第一点说明运动有利于保持良好的体型。第二点说运动有利于身体健康。第三点又从自身说运动不仅对身体有好处，而且还能提高体育成绩，最后再次呼吁，生命在于运动，大家都运动起来吧。本文结构清晰，论点明确，语言丰富，主题明确，是一篇不错的考场佳作。但是不免还是有一些遗憾，语言有些地方不够简练，重复性的词语使用较多。希望大家予以借鉴，写出更优秀的英语作文。 （指导教师：李 超）