孟晓晨
In the modern world, English is becoming more and more important for us. So we must learn English well. But learning English is not as easily as we think for many people. They have different problems in learning English, so I want to say some of my ways to learn English.
Firstly, listening is important. If you want to do well, youd better do lots of listening practice to improve your listening skill. Listening to the radio and watch English language TV are both good ways for listening. Secondly, you should talk to people in English as much as possible in order to improve your spoken English. Is a good idea to make conversations with your friends and practice reading English everyday. Thirdly, you can read English magazines or newspapers and write down the beautiful drills or sentences. Remember, learn by doing.
If you can follow my advice, I think your English will be better and better.
简评:随着全球化时代的到来,英语扮演了一个重要的角色。英语,这个国际通用的语言,和我们的生活息息相关,要适应社会的发展、时代的要求,就必须学好英语。但是要学好英语对缺乏语境的在校中学生来说,确实是个很大的难题。本文小作者结合自己的学习经验,给出了切实可行的办法。文章先由英语的重要性开篇,指出学习时不同人有不同的难处,那么该怎么学才能学好呢?引入到自己的见解。由“They have different problems in learning English, so I want to say some of my ways to learn English”一句,承上启下,过渡自然。主体部分也就是小作者的建议部分,从听、说、读、写4个方面,告诉我们中学生该如何学,才能学好。最后呼应文章开头:If you can follow my advice, I think your English will be better and better. 综观全文,小作者以总分总的方式来写这篇文章,格式清晰,内容较充实,是一篇实用性、可读性较强的例文。 (指导教师:周玉芝)