Doing my part

李安

Were growing up and we need do something carefully. Now were busy at school. Well study hard to get good grades. Well ask our teachers for help if we have questions in class.

At home, we should help our parents do housework. They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full days work. We should do some housework in order to let them have a rest. When were free, we should talk with them more. In this way, it can help us understand each other better.

Besides these things, we wouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. We should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Dont use plastic bags too often, they will become white pollution.

In a word, if each of us does our part from now on, our world will become a harmonious society.

简评：本文能够按照题目要求，展开叙述，内容完整、切题。详细介绍了作为一名初中生在学校、在家里应该怎样去做，而且对未来和谐社会寄予希望。作文中运用了study hard, ask for, help ...do，talk with等动词短语，将身边事情的处理方式描述得非常详细。且结构严谨，语法准确，体现了作者快乐、健康、向上的积极心态。

（指导教师：李池红）

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