My Dream

这是一篇关于理想的作文，学生可以从梦想是什么（what）、为什么有这样的梦想（why）、怎样实现梦想（how）等方面入手。学生在实际生活中可以体察、体认不同职业的特点，树立理想信念，形成正确的价值观，为实现个人梦、中国梦而努力。

astronaut航天员

inventor发明家

postman邮递员

scientist科学家

pilot飞行员

lawyer律师

artist艺术家

vet兽医

doctor医生

nurse护士

teacher教师

policeman警察

worker工人

writer作家

farmer农民

care about

help sick people

make a lot of money

have a better life

make our country better

make people happy

invent（发明） useful things

keep people safe

help people

protect our country

help sick animals

catch bad guys

work at home

let people know the truth（真相）

make wonderful things

do scientific experiments（实验）

study hard

read widely（广泛地）

keep healthy

go to college（大学）

have a good education（教育）

practice a lot

learn more about

learn from

keep patient（有耐心的）

do sports

介绍自己的梦想，以及有这样的梦想的原因。

I want to be a/ an... like...

I will be/ do... because... I remember... So I want to... I also want to...

介绍为了实现自己的梦想，自己会做些什么。

As the saying goes，“No pain， no gain.” To make my dream come true， I will...

A/ An... should...， so I will... What’s more， ...

总结，表明实现梦想的信心、决心。

Being a/ an... is not easy， but I will never give up. With my efforts， I believe my dream will come true.

❶时态准确：关于理想的描述与原因的阐述，建议使用一般现在时；关于如何实现理想的阐述，可使用一般将来时。

❷句意连贯：使用适当的连接词和过渡短语，使句意表达更连贯。

❸语言优美：恰当使用形容词、副词或名言警句等，更生动形象地表达情感、深化主题。

佳作发现地：江苏省泰州市口岸小学五（6）班

指导老师：万丽

Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen， because science can make our country stronger and stronger.

To make my dream come true， I will study hard and never stop asking questions. I will do more scientific experiments， as the saying goes， “Experience is the mother of wisdom.” I believe that with my efforts， I will become a scientist in the future.

I have a big dream. I want to be a policeman because I want to help people and keep them safe.

A policeman needs to be strong to catch bad guys. To make my dream come true， I will exercise every day. I will study hard and learn about laws and important skills because a policeman should be able to solve problems.

I believe I will make my dream come true！

佳作发现地：江苏省泰州市胡庄小学五（1）班

指导老师：史丹丹

I have a great dream. My dream is to be a great scientist like Qian Xuesen because I love science. Scientists make great contributions（贡献） to our country. We have computers， mobile phones and many other things because of scientists. They make our lives better.

To make my dream come true， I will study hard and read more science books every day. I will also do more sports and keep healthy.

I hope my dream can come true because nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

Do you have a dream？ Of course！ Everyone has a dream and so do I.

I want to be a woman football player because I love playing football. I want to play and win for our country in the World Cup（世界杯） and the Olympic Games（奥林匹克运动会） someday.

To make my dream come true，I will play football every day. I will study hard and read more books about football. I will also learn from other players. I believe my dream can come true because “There is a will， there is a way.”