My Great World

In my small world， everything is full of magic and beauty. My small world is a beautiful garden with colourful flowers， green grass， and a clear stream. Every morning， birds sing in the branches， and butterflies dance among the flowers.

In this small world， I have a tiny wooden house. There is a small mailbox on the door. The mailbox is always filled with letters and cards from my friends， and each letter brings me joy and surprise.

I like to sit by the stream and watch the little fish swim back and forth. Sometimes， I take out my paintbrushes and paper to draw the beautiful scenery around me.

My small world is filled with love and warmth.

深圳市南山区前海路阳光小学四（1）班 邓博宇

指导老师 朱平平：

小作者用文字生动描绘了一个充满爱与魔法的小世界。语言简洁，结构清晰，情感真挚，充满想象力和创造力。通过具体的细节描写，如木屋、小溪等，展现了小作者对美好世界的向往和热爱。