My Schoolbag

This is my big schoolbag. It is red and blue.

Look！ There are many books in my schoolbag.

You can also see a beautiful pencil case in my schoolbag.

Sometimes I put some crayons in the schoolbag.

I like drawing. I always draw with my friends.

My schoolbag is my best friend. I love it.

江苏省无锡市阳山中心小学三（2）班 王一轩

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