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任新超 男,湖北省襄阳市东津新区金源中学优秀教师,从事教育工作多年;在省级刊物上发表过若干篇论文;曾在襄阳广播电视台英语新闻栏目担任播音员;曾获得湖北省微课比赛三等奖、襄阳市微课一等奖、襄阳市教学能手、襄阳市青教赛三等奖、公开课教学竞赛一等奖等荣誉称号;指导的学生在各类竞赛中取得了出色成绩,多人获得省级奖和地市级奖。
Many students don’t know how to learn English well. Now, here are my advice①.
First and foremost, we must improve our speaking skills. We should keeppracticing pronunciation. We should also listen to tapes or have conversations withour friends. Additionally, we should practice to read于English books. We just readquickly to get the main ideas at first. Don’t read word by word but read word groups.Last but not least, we can always ask ourselves questions and try to find out theresults to review what we have learned. After all, knowledge comes from question③.
All in all, we should learn wisely and improve our English by practicing. Asthe saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”
湖北省襄阳市东津新区金源中学 杜雨宸
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本文在开头引出话题,在主体部分提出几个建议,在结尾总结主要观点,并以一句名言作为结束语,全文结构清晰、中心明确、语言流畅,是一篇不错的学生习作。
需要修改的地方院
①advice 改成suggestions。advice 是不可数名词,不应与表复数的谓语动词are 搭配。
②to read 改成reading。practice doing sth.意为“练习做某事”。
③question 改成questioning。from 是介词,后面应接question(v. 质疑)的动名词形式。评分院
按中考英语作文满分15 分的评分标准,本文修改前可得13分