主题1：书面表达考点预测与考法预判

昝亚娟

四层考点预测

1. 应用文考查

（1）感谢信

Dear... （称呼），

I have won... （奖项/荣誉） in the... （比赛） I am writing to express my sincere gratitudeto you for your kind help.

Before I... （比赛前）， I felt nervous/anxious... （感受） because I... （原因） When I turnedto you for help， you encouraged me to... （鼓励的方面） You were patient with me when I feltat a loss. Not only did you... （帮助点一）， but you also... （帮助点二） Without your kindhelp， I couldnt have... （取得成就）

Thank you again for your kind help.

Yours，

Li Hua

（2）建议信

Dear... （称呼），

I am sorry to know that you are... （体谅对方的感受） Im writing to make somesuggestions for you.

First of all， it is important for you to... （建议一） Second， youd better... （建议二） Be⁃sides/More importantly， it is a good idea to... （建议三）

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours，

Li Hua

（3）求助信

Dear... （称呼），

I'm Li Hua， a student in... （学校或班级） I am writing to seek help from you.

The problem is that I lack experience in... （缺乏经验的方面） Knowing you are an ex⁃pert at/in/on... （具体擅长的方面）， Im wondering whether you can offer me some help.Would you be so kind as to... （提出请求）？

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

（4）祝贺信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am excited to know you have won... （奖项/荣誉） in the... （比赛） I am writing to offermy sincere congratulations to you on your success.

I know that you have made great efforts in... （肯定其努力的方面） That is why youhave defeated other competitors. You have set such a great example to me. I hope you willkeep on trying and make greater progress in the... （具体努力的方面）

Congratulate again on your success！

Yours，

Li Hua

（5）道歉信

Dear... （称呼），

I am sorry to tell you that I cannot... （具体无法赴约的事项） as planned. I am writingto express my sincere apology to you.

The reason why I fail to... （具体不能做的事情） is that... （理由） I suggest... （补救措施） I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.

Once again Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. I hope you can forgive me.

Yours，

Li Hua

（6）邀请信

Dear... （称呼），

（具体的活动）...will be held/launched/organized on the morning of next Friday. Know⁃ing that you are interested in... （与活动有关的主题）， Id like to invite you to attend it withme.

The activity will take place in... （具体地点） Some teachers and students are invited tobe present. There will be... （其他） I am sure you will have a lot of fun.

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. Looking forward to yourparticipation.

Yours，

Li Hua

（7）倡議信

Dear friends，

I am writing this letter to call on your attention to... （倡议内容）

As we all know， over the past few years， ... （事件） have happened frequently. Theyhave caused... （带来的后果）， which has sounded an alarm to human beings. So it is hightime that we should make joint efforts to... （措施） It is everyones responsibility to... （行动）A small change in our way of life makes a big difference.

Please start from now on.

Thank you！

（8）申请信

Dear... （称呼），

I am really delighted to learn that... （职位） is required/wanted， and I feel this... （职位或机会） is specially tailored to me.

To start with， my advantage first lies in the fact that... （优势一） Furthermore，...（优势二）Finally， there is no problem with... （优势三）

I do hope my... （资质或能力） will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Should you need any details related to my application， feel free to contact me at... （联系方式）

Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（9）咨询信

Dear... （称呼），

I am... （自我介绍）. I am writing to inquire about... （要询问的内容）

The following is my confusion. First of all， Im tempted to know... （要咨询的问题一）Secondly， when will...？ （要咨询的问题二） Thirdly， is...？ （要咨询的问题三）

I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and youcan contact me via... （表达感谢）

Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.

Yours

Li Hua

（10）通知

通知通常包括时间、地点、人物、事件和注意事项等几个要素。

第一段：引起注意。

第二段：通知某事的具体细节。

第三段：注意事项。

第一段（引起注意）：

①May I have your attention， please？ I have an announcement to make.

②Attention， please！ I have something important to tell you.

第二段（通知某事的具体细节）：

We are going to hold/host a discussion about... A...will be held in...on... All the teach⁃ers and students are required to attend it. Please bring your notebooks and take notes while listening. There will be an ask⁃and⁃answer session after the speech. It is a great opportunityfor you to... Please come on time and dont be late. Whoever interested is welcome to par⁃ticipate. Dont forget to/Please remember to...

第三段（结尾）：

①We are looking forward to your participation. I hope youll have a great time.

②Thank you for listening.

③That's all. Thank you.

2. 非应用文考查

（1）人物介绍

第一段（引出话题）：

①Among the people who inspire me most， I admire my grandma most.

②Many people love me and give me support when I need it. Among them， the person I respect most is my dear mother.

③My father is John Smith. He is my real hero， best friend and the one I respect most.

④There are many respectable people around us. But the person I respect most is my head teacher， Miss Li， who is also my Chinese teacher.

第二段（描述人物）：

①She is always willing to help others. Early in the morning she is already out sayinghello to the elderly who are doing exercise in the park and checking whether they need anyhelp. Many people in our community have received her kind help.

②She has been teaching Chinese for twenty years， and she is passionate about thesubject she teaches. She is kind and considerate towards us. Hard⁃working and knowledge⁃able， she is considered as one of the best teachers in our school. When we have a problem，we will turn to her for help. She always talks to us patiently and gives a satisfying answer.

第三段（人物评价）：

①Grandma Li is very kind， warm⁃hearted， considerate and generous. That is why we all respect her.

②In our eyes， she is not only our teacher， but also our best friend. That is why I re⁃spect her most.

③Though my mother is only an ordinary housewife， she does teach us how to live our  life in the best way. I feel lucky to have such a mother.④My father is such a good role model that he always inspires me to work hard at mylessons and be the best that I can.

（2）新闻报道

第一段：一句话概括该事件。

第二段：陈述与该事件相关的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。

第三段：人们对该事件的评价或当事人的感悟。

第一段（概括该事件）：

①As Earth Day was approaching， a series of activities were launched in our school to mark this special day.

②To broaden the students horizons and promote their creativity， our school arranged for students to attend...

③Last Sunday the Han?style costume show was held in the art center of our school.We appreciated the charm of the centuries⁃old costume and learned more about traditional Chinese culture.

第二段（陈述与该事件相关的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果）：

①As soon as we got there， we experienced...， which made learning more interesting.

②The show started with...

③The audiences were so excited that they...

④There were...which drew warm loud applause from the audience.

⑤Li Hua made a speech in the city square on behalf of our class， calling on the citi⁃zens to reduce waste and recycle the second⁃hand items so that we can protect the environ⁃ment.

第三段（对该事件的感悟和评价）：

①The exhibition was more than a feast for the eyes. It allowed us to look into the fu⁃ture and look forward to living a better life in the future.

②This show was warmly welcomed because it is not only a feast for the eyes， but it also passes on our traditional culture to young people.

③The activity is warmly welcomed by people from all walks of life. They think highly of us because we can make a difference in our community.

（3）报告——记述一次讨论

第一段：引出讨论的内容。

第二段：陈述相关观点。

第三段：得出结论。

第一段（引出讨论的内容）：

①...has become a hot topic among people. Recently some students have had a heated discussion about... Their opinions are varied.

②We've had a discussion about whether...should be carried out. Our opinions are di⁃vided on this issue.

第二段（陈述相关观点）：

①Some people are against/for the idea. 35% of the students think there are more ad⁃vantages. There is no doubt that...

②There is no denying that...

③It is obvious that...has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.However， some people hold the opposite view. They argue that...

第三段（得出结论）：

①As far as Im concerned， ...should be encouraged.

②From my perspective， I firmly believe that their advantages outweigh their disad⁃vantages.

（4）议论文

●万能句型

①Recently， the problem of...has been brought to public attention. 最近，……问题已经引起了公众的广泛关注。

②Everything has two sides and...is not an exception. It has both advantages and dis⁃advantages. 任何事物都有两面性，……也不例外。它既有优点也有缺点。

③I cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我无法完全同意……这一观点。

④I think its time we put a stop to... 我认为该是我们停止……的时候了。

⑤In my opinion， it is more advisable to do...than to do...在我看来，做……比做……更明智。

⑥Some people think that... To be frank， I cannot agree with their opinion for the rea⁃sons below. 有些人认为……坦率地说，出于如下原因，我不同意他们的观点。

⑦The answer to this problem involves many interrelated reasons. For one thing， ...For another， ... 這一问题的答案涉及许多相互关联的原因。一方面……，另一方面……

⑧There are at least two reasons contributing to... 至少有两条理由导致了……

⑨Its hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说……

⑩If we cant take useful means， we may not control this trend， and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly， so what we should do is... 我们如果不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，并且会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

11.As far as I am concerned， I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that... 就我而言，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点。我认为……

12.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。

13.In a word， the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can...in the future.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……的问题。只有这样才能在将来……

●黄金模板

①对比观点型

Some people believe that （. 观点一）For example， they think .（举例论证）And it will bring them （. 为他们带来的好处/坏处）

In my opinion， this reason can be the point/its disadvantages are far more than its ad⁃vantages.（亮明自己的观点）For one thing， （. 反对的理由之一）For anotherthing， （. 反对的理由之二）

From all what I have said， I agree with the thought that （. 自己的看法）

②社会现象型

Nowadays， there exists a common phenomenon that （. 社会现象描述）

There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon.（主题句）For onething， （. 理由一）Foranother， .（理由二）Whatismore， .（理由三）

Based on the above discussions， I can easily forecast that more and more people will（. 推断或预测）

③解决问题型

In recent years， we have to face a problem that （， 某种问题）which is be⁃coming more and more （. 说明问题的现状）As we all know， it is important for（. 说明解决问题的重要性）

We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation（. 总说，提出解决问题的办法）For one thing， （. 方法一）For another， .（方法二）Finally， （. 方法三）

Personally， I believe .（自己的解决方法） Consequently， I ' m confidentthat （. 对解决该问题很有信心）

四翼考法预判

1. 保持半开放性

为充分发挥高考的选拔功能，高考书面表达将继续采用半开放性形式，为考生留出较大的自主发挥的空间。

典题链接

假定你是李华，你的外国网友Eric目前在你所在的学校留学，他想在暑假期间参观一些具有中国特色的古建筑。请根据下面的写作提示，给他写一封邮件。

1. 推薦一处古建筑；

2. 该古建筑的主要特点；

3. 推荐的原因。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

命题分析

本题是半开放性作文。考生需要自主决定写哪一处具有中国特色的古建筑，并介绍其主要特点以及推荐的原因，这有利于考查考生的综合能力。

佳作欣赏

Dear Eric，

I'm delighted to know that you are interested in ancient Chinese architecture. Id liketo recommend you to visit the Great Wall.

The Great Wall has a history of over 2，000 years. It is the longest wall in the worldthat was built by hand. It is as long as 21，196.18 kilometers from east to west， just like ahuge dragon across North China. As a saying goes，“He who doesn't reach the Great Wall isnot a true man.”I hope you can come and visit it one day.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

2. 考查方式多样化

为了防止试题模式的固化，书面表达的考查方式可能会更加灵活多样。除了用文字提示之外，试题的说明部分也可能采用图表、图画与文字相结合的方式。

典题链接

假定你是李华，你所在的兴趣小组就“学生如何减压？”对同学们进行了调查，下面的饼图显示了调查的结果。请根据饼图的数据，为校英文报的《学生园地》栏目写一篇稿件。内容包括：

1. 调查结果；

2. 分析数据；

3. 谈谈你的看法。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

命题分析

该作文的提示方式为文字加图表。试题要求考生表述饼图上的一组数据，对数据进行分析，并发表个人的看法，对考生的思辨能力提出较高的要求。

佳作欣赏

Recently， our interest group has conducted a survey on“How do students release pres⁃sure？”The above pie chart shows the findings： 30% of the students share it with friendswhile 25% play sports or listen to music. 22% keep it to themselves and 13% surf the Inter⁃net. In addition， 10% turn to their hobbies.

It is obvious that most students know how to release pressure properly， which enablesthem to live a happy life. What is advisable is that teachers and parents should show con⁃cern to those who keep it to themselves when they are under pressure.

典题链接

在英语课堂上，老师展示了下面一幅图画，请你谈谈你是怎么理解这幅图画的。请根据下面的写作提示，写一篇英语发言稿。

1. 简要描述图画的内容；

2. 解释图画的寓意；

3. 谈谈你的看法。

命题分析

本题要求考生简要描述图画的内容，并解释图画的寓意，还要谈谈自己对图画的看法。不同的人对图画有不同的理解。看图写作既考查考生观察和分析问题的能力，同时又考查考生的人生观和价值观，发挥了试题的育人功能，体现了对“立德树人”的落实。

佳作欣赏

From the picture we can see two glasses of water. Some people see the glasses are halffull while others see they are half empty.

The picture reminds us that different people react to the same thing in different ways.Some people show a positive attitude while others show a negative attitude. Those who arepositive always focus on the bright side of things while those who are negative are opposite.

In my opinion， it is important to develop a good attitude to life， which enables us tofind solutions to the problems instead of just complaining or waiting for someone else tosolve the problems.

3. 命題情境贴近生活，落实“五育并举”

书面表达将依据学习和生活创设比较真实的情境，使考生有话可说。

典题链接

上周末，你和同学参加了一次农场采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇题目为“My weekend”的短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

命题分析

该试题要求考生写一篇介绍农场采摘活动的短文，命题情境贴近生活，考查“五育并举”中的劳动教育。

佳作欣赏

My weekend

Last weekend， we took part in a picking activity on a farm. We took a bus from ourschool， and the farm was about 2 kilometers away. When we arrived at the farm， we saw seve⁃ral kinds of animals， fresh vegetables and fruit trees on the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits， and the other group packed up thefruits. It was a meaningful day and we learned a lot from the activity. Through the activity，we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure thefood planted by those hard⁃working farmers.

4. 引入命题作文的考查

考生根据所给题目写作文，如给考生提供一个观点或描述某种现象，要求考生就该观点或现象发表自己的看法。

典题链接

请根据以下提示并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

Courage is the light of a man in adversity.

注意：

1. 无须写标题；

2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；

3. 内容必须结合生活中的具体事例。

命题分析

本题取材于一句英语谚语，即“勇气是逆境中的光”。该题要求考生就这一观点发表自己的看法。考生不仅要分析所给观点，还要结合自己所知道的现象或情况，发表并论证自己的观点。

佳作欣赏

Adversity is indispensable to everyones life and it always takes courage to defeat it.

Last week， David took part in a big cross⁃country run. As a student with a brain di⁃sease which prevented him from walking or running like other children， he was hesitantabout the race. However， being courageous to face every challenge， he eventually joined inthe race and finished the competition. He won praise from all the audience although hedidnt win a satisfactory place. His experience showed that nothing could be adversities tosomeone with great courage.

一核考題预演

本部分见P57～P69学习妙测“2023年高考热点命题：书面表达”内容。