五篇短文改错训练题

石晓娜 邓中南

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，每篇作文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Hua is the student of middle school，which likes sharing his stories. This is one of his stories. One day，Li Huas father was cutting up carrot in the kitchen when his son entered into it. Interrupted by his crying，her father asked，“Whats the matter，my honey？”“I am cut up by the result of my examination，”answers Li Hua. “I assume that you didnt work hard and it is no use  cry over the spilt milk. You have no alternative but work hardly，” his father comforted him.

I was born in a peacefully village where my primary school was found. I will never forget  the first day which I went to school. My teacher Mr Green tells me that，“If you dont want to be out of the work in the future，you must work hard！” I didnt mean to work hard， I stayed at home watching TV about violence，which meaned waste time and youth. However，Mr Green always helped me with my study and she was generous with his time，to which I was grateful. So I devoted myself to studying all day. Day by day，I had reached a stage where no one could equal me in all the subject.

Have you ever dreamed of perform in front of thousand of people in the form of singing and dancing and pretended that you are a famous star like Liu Huan or Song Zuying？ Honest， being famous star can earn a lot of money. So，not every one can become a famous  star，that depends on talent and efforts. So stop by day dreaming！ As Thomas Carlyle once said，“Our main business are not to see what lies dimly at a distance but to do what lies clearly at hand.” I  attached much importance to studying hard. Work hard，or his dream will break up someday.

Li Hua and his beautiful wife were sleeping while they heard a noise. They find their house was in fire. Fortunate，having learned some knowledges of first aid，they were safe. But their house was burnt to the ground. They decided to made their way to Beijing. He found a job in a big company what has pieces scientific equipment and whose workers were from all over the world. Soon Li Hua was appointed as a manager. To Li Huas delight，her wife gave birth a handsome boy. It is said that they lead a happy life. Best wishes for them.

One day， my classmates and I worked as volunteer. We went to a special school，which all the students were disabled. Excited and nervous，we taught themselves Chinese literature. They listened us so carefully that we almost forget to rest. After class，we played games with them happy on the playground. When leaving for home，we donated some books that we had been bought at a local bookstore. To my surprise， the boy showed me a box as a gift. I was about to open it while he stopped me， asking me to do it after return home. Guess what？ It was a drawing of me speaking before the class！

答案：Ⅰ. 第一句中the改為a，which改为who。第三句中carrot改为carrots，into 去掉。第四句中her改为his。第五句中answers改为answered。第六句中it is no use 前的 and改为but，cry改为crying。接下来一句中but 与 work 之间加to，hardly改为hard。

Ⅱ.第一句中peacefully改为peaceful，found改为founded。第二句中which改为when。第三句中tells改为told，out of the work的the去掉。第四句中在I stayed at home之前加and，waste改为wasting。第五句中she改为he，to改成for。第七句中subject改为subjects。

Ⅲ . 第一句中perform 改为performing，thousand改为thousands。第二句中Honest改为Honestly，being后加a。第三句中So改为However，that改为which。第四句中by去掉。第五句中are改为is。第六句中attached改为attach。第七句中his改为your。

Ⅳ . 第一句中while 改为when。第二句中find 改为found，in改为on。第三句中Fortunate改为Fortunately，knowledges改为knowledge。第五句中made改为make。第六句中what改为that或which。第七句中manager前的a 去掉。第八句中her改为his，birth后加to。

Ⅴ. 第一句中volunteer改为volunteers。第二句中 which改为where或in which。第三句中 themselves改为them。第四句 listen后面加to， forget改为forgot。第五句中 happy改为happily。第六句中的 been去掉。第七句中the改为a。第八句中while改为when，return改为returning。

（责任编校 周丹）