❷I like playing basketball

河北省献县第二中学九（）班 李可可

There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy，such as swimming，running and walking.However，the sport that I like most is playing basketball.

When I was eleven years old，I started to play basketball at school.I was tall enough to joining the school basketball team.The basketball team leader invited me several times to join them.But my parents disagreed with me on the point.They thought it would cost me too much time.Going to a university was what they expected me to.They allowed me to play basketball as a hobby.

Now，I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can.The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

教师点评

这是一篇介绍自己喜欢的体育运动的英语习作。全文中心突出，层次清晰，语句流畅。

作者在文章开头列举了几种自己喜欢的体育运动，但最喜欢的运动是篮球。接下来又叙述了自己自小就喜欢篮球，后来为加入学校篮球队和父母产生了分歧。现在会尽可能多地看篮球比赛。文中巧妙地运用了一些宾语从句、定语从句等。另外，such as、however、cost、allow、as...as one can等词语也运用得非常好。

美中不足的是，画线部分出现了一点错误，应改为join；结尾处有点突兀，若加上“How about you?”等句子会显得更完美一些。