江西省萍乡市芦溪县芦溪镇第二中心学校 徐 博 批阅:Lois Hill
指导老师:魏紫林 整理:李 娟
I have an English teacher. Her name is Wei Zilin.
She is short and thin. She has long hair, big eyes, a small nose and cherry lips.
She is young. She is kind, but sometimes strict. She is hard-working. She is very helpful. She is funny, too. Her English class is very interesting. I like my English teacher very much.
评语
This is a well-structured composition. I think your English teacher will be happy to see your description of her.
文章结构完整。我想你的英语老师看到你对她的描述一定很高兴。