做最好的自己

安徽省合肥市第46 中学九年级︵22︶班 尹 睿

尹睿同学，活泼开朗，爱好广泛。他喜欢读书、跑步、打篮球、弹吉他等。学习成绩优秀，曾两次获得学校奖学金，多次获得学校“方正通达”之星称号。下面是他的一篇英语习作：

To begin with,I am happy to introduce myself.Just like other persons,I have some advantages as well as disadvantages.I don’t have a handsome face,but I do have big eyes and black hair.In a way,I’m thought to be just a common person if you see me for the first time.However,as the saying goes,don’t judge a person by his looks.From my point of view,the thought which a human has is more important.

In the past fifteen years,I’ve met lots of difficulties.However,along with them,the willpower,which used to hide at the bottom of my heart,turns up in my mind,because of which my character becomes strong.Besides,as a child,I also have many hobbies,such as playing badminton,reading classical works.In my free time,no sooner has the homework been finished than I put my heart into the hobbies.If my memory is correct,it’s already five years since I first play badminton.In my opinion,nothing can be more delightful than playing it.Also,my family members are fond of reading.So I like it as well.It makes me happy.

Next I’ll talk about my study.As we know,almost everyone meets different kinds of troubles.As far as I’m concerned,no matter how hard the trouble is,do not give up,do your best.I believe that the difficulty will be solved.Every time I follow the ways above,I always get success.Although I sometimes fail,I have no regrets,that’s important.

Last but not the least,my school gives me a fantastic environment to study in.It has a quiet library,which includes mountains of books.Another thing is the huge playground where most students enjoy themselves.My school is always full of joy.

In a word,no pains,no gains.Just try to be the best of myself,that’s me.So what do you think of me?Hope we can be good friends.

教师点评：

本文是一篇记叙文。作者首先介绍了自己的外貌、爱好等，然后叙说了自己爱读书的家庭、海量图书馆以及能进行多种活动的巨大的学校运动场。作者重点介绍了自己的观点、意志和克服困难的决心和态度，这些才是做最好的自己的关键所在。

文章的段落层次清晰，句式结构灵活，语法运用正确，遣词造句精准，显示出了小作者扎实的英语语言功底。