高考英语经历感受类书面表达题导写

陈广乙

一、文体概述

该类写作多为个人经历、通讯报道和日记等， 以一般过去式为主，按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。考生可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then， later， next串联句子。至于感受部分。考生平时可以多积累情感相关的单词或短语， 如an unforgettable experience， to my joy/delight， be satisfied/ content with等等，增添色彩。

二、必备短语

1. have a discussion about讨论……

2. pick sb up （用车）接某人

3. set off for a place 动身前往某地

4. see sb off为某人送行

5. an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历

6. win the second prize获得二等奖

7. think highly of ...... 高度赞扬......

8. set a good example to us为我们树立了一个好榜样

9. be impressed by ...... 对……印象深刻； 为……所感动

10. devote ones spare time to helping others 利用业余时间帮助他人

三、套用句式

1. This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. 这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。

2. From this experience I realize that its not easy but meaningful to be a journalist.通过这次经历， 我意识到做记者是不容易但又有意义的。

3. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 只有通过循序渐进地学习， 我们才能有所成就。

4. I benefit a lot from this unforgettable experience and realized that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others and brings us real happiness. 这次经历让我受益匪浅， 我意识到正是诚实才让我们赢得别人的尊重和得到真正的快乐。

5. What you said /The fact mentioned in your story moved me to tears.你故事中所说/提到的事让我感动得流下了眼泪。

四、习作修改 下列習作中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

The other day， I happened to read a meaningful story. It reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. Tom was once bad ill and went to see a doctor. The doctor gave him some pills， telling him to take them three time a day. But， he failed to follow the doctors advice and took it 9 times a day. To his great surprise， he became better. Just as the old saying going，“Haste makes waste.” No matter we do， we should obey with the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only in learning step by step can we achieve success.

五、课堂练习

假设你是李华，你参加一个志愿者活动， 回来以后感触良多。请你根据以下信息， 写一封信给你的美国笔友Jack分享经历和感受：

时间：7月12日—7月20日

对象：500位来自广州各中学的学生志愿者

工作：到老人院帮老人家做家务，陪他们聊天，为老人家表演节目

感受：获益良多，辛苦，但是值得

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好。

提示：老人院nursing home

Dear Jack，

How are things going？ I cant help telling you my experience.

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What do you think？ Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

六、课外作业

假设你是李华，你今天参加一个英语演讲比赛， 回来以后感触良多。请你根据以下信息， 写一封信给你的美国笔友Jack分享经历和感受：

时间：今天上午9点

地点：学校礼堂

活动：全校英语演讲比赛

过程：第一次上台，过于紧张；迅速调整后，顺利完成

感受：没有获奖，但收获满满

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好。

提示：礼堂auditorium

Dear Jack，

How are things going？ I cant help telling you my experience.

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

What do you think？ Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

參考答案与解析

习作修改

本文讲的是作者的朋友Tom，在某次生病后，吃药时没有遵医嘱，将一天吃药3次变成9次，结果病情反而加重了。作者的感受是，我们做事情时应该遵守规律，否则欲速则不达。

1. reminds→reminded 描述过去发生的事情，谓语动词应用过去式。

2. bad→badly修饰形容词ill应该用副词。

3. time→times 当time表示“次数”时是可数名词，一天3次，应该用复数形式。

4. But→However 习惯用法，在However之后一般会有逗号，而but后则不需要。

5. it→them 上文提到pills，可数名词复数，指代词应该一致，用them。

6. better→worse 使他惊讶的是，表明吃过量的药效果出乎Tom的意料，再从下文haste makes waste，即欲速则不达，应该说明Tom的病变得更严重了。

7. going→goes 像一句老话所说的，这里有连词as，因此连接的是句子，需要谓语动词，又因为主语为动名词，谓语用第三人称单数。

8. 在matter和we中间加what 此处表达“不管我们做什么”应添加what。

9. 把obey后的with去掉 表达“遵守……”，obey为及物动词，直接加宾语。

10. in→by 只有通过一步一步地学习，表示通过某种方式，一般用介词by

课堂练习

Dear Jack，

How are things going？ I cant help telling you my experience.

From July 12th to 20th， I， together with the other 499 students from different high schools in Guangzhou， joined in an activity to work as a volunteer in a nursing home. Our main job is to do housework for the elderly. After that， we chatted freely and happily with them and gave them our prepared show. It was a fantastic day.

Honestly speaking， it was a tiring day and I felt exhausted. But it was worth it. Through this meaningful activity， I learn that giving is much happier than receiving. Old people spent most of their lives contributing to the society. And now， it is our teenagers responsibility to show our respect and do something for them.

What do you think？ Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

课外作业

Dear Jack，

How are things going？ I cant help telling you my experience.

This morning at 9 oclock， I participated in an English speech contest in the school auditorium. It was my first time to speak in front of so many students and teachers. When I got onto the stage， my mind suddenly went blank. I opened my mouth only to find nothing to say. I took a few deep breaths and tried to focus. Luckily， all the memories came back to me gradually and I finished the show smoothly.

Though I didnt win any prize， I learn that nervousness is nothing to be afraid of. The only thing we can and should do is stay calm and focused， and most importantly， always have confidence in ourselves.

What do you think？ Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

责任编辑 蒋小青