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张　东

原文：

Food

I like bananas. For breakfast, I like bananas, eggs and milks1. I like any2 rice, vegetables and bananas. For dinner, I also like bananas and hamburgers. And3 my young sister dont4 like them. She like5 meat, so she is very fat.

分析：本文条理清晰、意思连贯地介绍了自己一日三餐的饮食习惯，而且还特别指出“香蕉”是自己的最爱，有重点，但也有几处错误：

1. milk为不可数名词，不能在其后加s。

2. any用于疑问句、否定句中，如I dont have any books, 而some用于肯定句或表请求的疑问句中，如Could you give me some rice?

3. 根据后面对like 的否定，得知此句与上句的意思不同，应用表示转折的连词but而不用表示并列的连词and。

4. 要否定实义动词like,则需借助dont或doesnt, my young sister为第三人称单数，所以应该用doesnt。

5. 主语she为第三人称单数，谓语动词也需用第三人称单数形式，即likes。

改正：

Food

I like bananas. For breakfast, I like bananas, eggs and milk. I like some rice, vegetables and bananas. For dinner, I also like bananas and hamburgers. But my young sister doesnt like them. She likes meat, so she is very fat.

(指导教师：郑一敏)