教你如何写“文学与艺术”书面表达

2021-08-12 02:12张新峰
考试与评价·八年级版 2021年5期
关键词:词数首歌短文

张新峰

分析全国中考关于此话题的命题,不难发现近两年考查量倍增。原因是各省教育部门在响应习总书记“全民阅读”的号召下,积极弘扬博大精深的中华传统文化,助推阅读热潮,以提高个人核心素养和全民综合素质。所以,把此话题作为中考命题就起到了非常正能量的引导作用。其命题角度有:

1. 谈论自己喜欢的某本书或者某种音乐;2. 阅读的好处;3. 语言的魅力;4. 名著介绍等。

一、知识储备

【开头句】

1. As we all know, it is important for us to read books. 众所周知,读书对于我们非常重要。

2. Here, Id like to introduce a good book to you. 我在这里向你们介绍一本好书。

3. The book Id like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea. 我想和你分享的书是《老人与海》。

4. I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. 我知道你对中国传统文化感兴趣。

5. Many people like music because music is powerful. 很多人喜欢音乐,因为音乐很有力量。

6. Reading is an interesting thing. 阅读是一件有趣的事。

7. Reading is very important in our life. 阅读在我们的生活中非常重要。

8. As we all know, we can not only get knowledge, but also open our minds by reading. 众所周知,通过阅读我们不仅可以获取知识,还可以开拓我们的思想。

【中间句】

1. Music can bring great joy to us. 音乐能给我们带来巨大的快乐。

2. He is interested in rock music. 他对摇滚乐感兴趣。

3. Reading is the most important skill to get knowledge. 阅读是获得知识最重要的技能。

4. His songs make us feel the true love. 他的歌让我们感受到了真爱。

5. Whats more, it gives us confidence and happiness. 更重要的是,它给我们信心和幸福。

6. In my opinion, we should develop a good habit of reading and fall in love with it. 在我看来,我们应该养成阅读的好习惯并爱上它。

7. In a word, its our duty to make reading become a part of our life and grow up with reading. 总之,让阅读成为我们生活的一部分,在阅读中成长,是我们的责任。

8. From then on, I began to have confidence in myself, and finally I made great progress. 从那时起,我开始对自己有信心,最后我取得了很大的进步。

9. As long as you show interest in it and work hard, I am sure you can do a good job. 只要你表现出兴趣,努力工作,我相信你能做好。

【结尾句】

1. I hope to listen to his songs live one day. 我希望有一天能現场听他的歌。

2. Reading can make a difference to our life. 阅读可以改变我们的生活。

3. What kind of music do you like best? 你最喜欢哪种音乐?

4. Reading is very important in our daily life because books are our friends. 因为书是我们的朋友,所以在我们的日常生活中阅读是非常重要的。

5. From my experience, I felt the power of words. 从我的经验来看,我感受到了语言的力量。

6. This tells us that nothing is terrible as long as we have a brave heart. 这告诉我们,只要我们有一颗勇敢的心,没有什么是糟糕的。

【俗语谚语·名言警句】

1. Reading makes a full man. 阅读造就完人。

2. Music is the soul of man! 音乐是人类的灵魂!

3. There are always advantages in opening a book. 开卷有益。

4. A book is like a garden carried in the pocket. 书是随时携带的花园。

5. Books are the ladder of human progress. 书籍是人类进步的阶梯。

6. There is a golden house in the book. 书中自有黄金屋。

二、写作典范

很多人都喜欢音乐,因为音乐能给人们带来力量和快乐。请根据以下提示介绍你最喜欢的一首歌曲。

1. 你最喜欢的歌曲是什么?

2. 演唱这首歌的歌手是谁?

3. 你为什么喜欢这首歌曲?

要求:1. 包括所有要点,适当发挥;

2. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名,语句连贯,词数80左右。

【写作提纲】

[篇章结构 素材串联 开头:引出话题 1. 许多人都喜欢音乐(music)

2. 人们喜欢音乐的原因(powerful, bring us happiness) 正文:介绍自己喜欢的歌曲 1. 我喜欢听音乐(listen to)

2. 歌手(a song sung by)

3. 喜欢这首歌的原因(realize the love in our life)

4. 补充介绍这个歌手(whats more) ]

【范文点评】

[① Many people like music. ② Thats because music is powerful and it can bring us happiness. ③ I love listening to music. ④ My favorite song is “Love Yourself”. ⑤ It is a famous song sung by Justin Bieber. ⑥ I like this song because it makes me realize the love in our life.    ⑦ Whats more, many of my friends like Justin Bieber and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His songs make us feel the true love. ⑧ I hope to listen to his song live one day. ① 点题。

② 介绍人们喜欢音乐的原因。

③ 过渡句,承上启下。

④ 点明自己喜欢的歌曲。

⑤ 点明歌手是谁。

⑥ 介绍自己喜欢这首歌的原因。

⑦ 补充介绍这个歌手,既丰富了短

文语境,也扩展了文章篇幅。

⑧ 表达自己的希望。 ]

三、写作练习

最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查。调查显示60%的人喜欢电子阅读,而只有不到40%的人选择纸质阅读。

请你用两段话写一篇不少于80词的短文,第一段简要说明调查内容,第二段选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的經历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.

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